From the dirt

You are the sun in my sky

The breath in my lungs

The vision in my eyes

You are my driving force

What is God but a creator

Dug out of a dark hole in the earth

I was forged in the fire of your smelter

In your refinery my impurities were taken

In your mold I have taken form

You tempered me, making me hard where I was soft

You hammered my iron shell

Sharpening my edges

You have smoothed my rough spots

You have given me meaning

Reviews

[Ashi written tale & poe..]

oh ! that awesome beautifully written

[Lisasview]

Hi Soren,
Really enjoyed your poem..
Lines like Dug a hole....
Make me think...
Which is always good..
Lisa, now in Spain

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and comment.

[Lisasview]

Glad to be reading your work Soren..
Lisa

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Woww a powerful poem, crafted so awesomely with muse and figuratives.
I love how you set the mold with words here. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

[Soren]

Thank you for your review and kind comment