Missing You

Like the echoes of an empty metal drum

That reverberates the certainty of your absence

You are everywhere but nowhere

Reviews

[Zoe Richardson]

How well I know this feeling! "You are everywhere but nowhere." I've always thought the living can haunt us as much as the dead. Missing someone is not limited to those who have passed on. You expressed the feeling so well here!

[Soren]

Thanks so much for taking your time to review and comment on my poem. Your comments are most appreciated

[William Michael Reeves]

This poem is dense. Dense with sound of meaning. I can hear the lonely echo off infinite walls muffled in tinny silence. Short and bittersweet.

Bill

[Soren]

Thank you so much for taking your time to review my poem and comment on it. Your comments are deeply appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Poet. You said everything that is true.
"You are everywhere but nowhere"
The closing lines. Hardest lesson, we must learn. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and kind words, Your comment is deeply appreciated.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Soren.