A different love

A different love

A Poem by Soren

I am darkness

Without which there could be no light

I am pain

Without which there could be no bliss

I am hatred

Without which there could be no love

I am the dog, awaiting his master's return

Kicked for blocking the gate

I am the goat, led outside the city walls

To be torn apart by wolves, to redeem those within

I am murky water, washing the dirt from your hands

Discarded as no longer fit for use

My vapor rising to the heavens

Will fall on you again, clean and pure

I will continue to guard you with my life

My blood and bones will fertilize your fields

And I will wet your fruits and grains

Causing them to grow and ripen

For I have not the courage to fight your battles

Nor the strength to bear your burden

My place is to take your disgrace

© 2022 Soren


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for everything there must be an opposite or nothing would exist.
I here until I am ripped apart and am just a fragmented memory.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and comments they are appreciated
This is black and white, like a photo snapshot of thoughts and feelings, as if the emotion was frozen in the picture….oooo how I love that!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind attention, review and comments
Patricia

2 Years Ago

You’re welcome
Back and forth and so it goes
On and on forever and ever
Sad write but enjoyed it.
Lisa

Posted 2 Years Ago


Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and comments
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are so welcome.
Yin And yang... And yet... an indefinable sadness. Words difficult to read, deeper then the deepest ravine.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and comments
My, my, this was so powerful and well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and comments
KAREN

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Very well written! Your pen painted some dark imagery that is vivid to the eyes!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments and review
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

my pleasure!
Sort of a Yin/Yang situation. Good vs. Evil....for every good there is an equal bad. Very dark poetry. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments
For I have not the courage to fight your battles
Nor the strength to bear your burden
My place is to take your disgrace

Love this part, This is wonderful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments

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