when

When does nothing become something?

When absence of thought becomes perception.

When does a curve becomes straight?

When distance becomes proximity

When does a lie becomes the truth?

When dark becomes light.

When does the defective become perfect?

When hate becomes love.

When does despair become hope?

When cruelty becomes kindness.

When does the lifeless become the living?

When the grave becomes humorous.

When does ignorance become intelligence?

When the past becomes the present

When does injustice become justice

When one believes they have won.

When?

The answer is in your question

When he leaves he becomes nothing

When he becomes nothing you have won

When you reverse what was won, it is now

There is no other time

Author's Note

The last part of the poem is a puzzle and anagram

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

When?
The answer is in your question
When he leaves he becomes nothing
When he becomes nothing you have won
When you reverse what was won, it is now
There is no other time

LOVE this a lot, this write is deep and intriguing
love this

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and comments

[lessa (kenzie)]

not a at problem

[Kim S.]

Hmm, kind of intriguing write here, I enjoyed this

[Soren]

Thank you for your comment and review