How now brown Tao

How bright the pain

How sharp the rain

Does anyone look to see the music play

The smell of the words

Brought tears to the birds

And broke the rainbows along the way

Brains are bent

Numbers are rent

As the geometry of the universe is unfolded

Blow holes in the Tao

As you paint the holy cow

And what once was right is now remolded

Reviews

[Shelley Warner]

An interesting collection of words. I like "brought tears to the birds" and "the geometry of the universe is unfolded". The ending line gives me a clue that you must be talking about a new understanding of things.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the review. The last line can be taken many ways but your idea is the first that occurred to me when I wrote it

[Shelley Warner]

I'm glad I understood what you were saying at the end. I don't know much about Taoism, but you mentioned it in one of the lines. I think it is about finding balance.

[Soren]

Thank you for your comment and in a sense you are right about balance