6 Months Later

If I could go back 6 months ago and kiss you

again for the last time.

It wouldn't be what it was:

Short, in a hurry.

Unaware what would be happening later.

No.

I would make you never forget it.

I'd put everything into that kiss.

All of the love I felt for you.

All of the pain I kept inside.

I'd want you to feel like we were the only two

people in the room.

Because If I kissed you like that,

Maybe you wouldn't have left me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime wishes and hope is all we have.
"Because If I kissed you like that,
Maybe you wouldn't have left me."
Those lasting wishes to saved a love lost. Become story and poetry for us in old age. Old wisdom of the ancient writers. When a Poet loved you. You will never be forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Draven_Writes]

You told a story in very few words. You told a story that almost everyone can relate to, and as a reader that is exactly what I want to be able to do. Good job

[Insight "MH"]

Regret is damaging to the future, somethings are not meant be and we must benefit from our past mistakes and move on. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.

Insight.

[A.marie.speaks]

classic feeling, you never know what you have til its gone. you captured it very well!

[B]

Its funny
i was thinking the same thing the other day
i wish i had really concentrated at that moment
i should have done more
then he wouldnt think of someone else
i dont know
i should have done more

once you meet someone you want
you measure time in accordance to the last time you saw him

this is a very real write