letting go of you

fall air, your smile

leaves change, so do i

"i dont feel the same"

never ending rain

hard truths, goodbyes

alone, new life

dull aches, sharp pains

in the very worst way

red leaves, blue eyes

white teeth, like sunshine

laughter in tears

too many years

memories, your touch

you mean too much

and still, leaves fall

cool breeze on us all

loved ones, fallout

moving on now

this night will end

sun shines again

"sleep friend", "okay"

tomorrows a new day

warm bed, cold room

blanket cocoon

letting go of you

letting go of you

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

I love the short almost fragmented lines! It works well with the primary theme within the poem. A beautifully written piece regarding how Love can be, the ups and downs.

Very well done, Sophy! :)

[Ballpark Frank]

I Am impressed by the rhyming. Nice!