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4/5/18
6:58 PM U.S. CST
"My Review of Hangin' by Sophy, A Fellow Writer's Cafe Author"
by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org)
Hey, Sophy
Well, um, I'm seeing dummy romance written all over this. Just don't take it as an insult, as I listen to a lot of music, and I mean a lot, and it all boils down to a majority of it being the same old boy meets girl, inward trail sign romance, with territorial instincts mixed in, for good measure.
You need to write from a different field of interest (rhetorical outfit), audience-wise, instead of the same old, same old, Mad Scientist Personality Type melodrama. Same field's, same humanity, if you really think about it, from there to here, especially in the mainstream media humanity.
I'd also consider things like affective saturation and intensity, in addition to field's. Your affective rhetoric is too consistent and stereotypical.
I don't know about you, but I'm the type of person who needs a new outfit, every now and then.
Don't take my review as an insult, as it's modern input. No need to fritter and wallow. Reality and fact's will prevail, instead of the same old Doctor's wanting the same old grants, with the same old terms and condition's, and if you really think about it, without the usual dummy, or better comeback's, ruthless coddler maneuver's, etc. I make perfect sense.
Dude, Your New Era! It can also mean on a personal level!
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