~Burning Dawn

"Heat of his dreams melt desires"

~Burning Dawn

When my skin touches bed of scattered senses
Dark blue blanket gazing at my naked soul
Musky grass blades tickle and tease,invading my thoughts
Which I lock away in the casket of my cerebral walls.

Kissing my mouth full with sacred messages left untold
Trailing down their delicious strokes over hungry psyche's body
Need to be consumed in nature's charm intensifies,breeze moans...
Ohhh this wanton craving to find release in arms of slumber!!!

Eyes hide what minds speaks with roaring thunder...
Whisperers awake in this secret garden of mine...
Taking me away to the pinnacle of rapture...
Where my body is ravaged by dreams of realms...

It quakes and writhes under his command!
Where devil in my head owns me,binding me to him in this unholy sin...
Dawn burns into tunnel of sweet surrender
Eyes open holding wisdom unknown to others.

~Sophy Freebirds ©

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.Enjoy.xoxo

Reviews

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From the title to the final word, this is beautiful poetry...to the vivid imagination your lines paint glorious pictures, finding and luring deep desires from their sleep...this is the type of dream from which one never wants to wake... and when one does wake, they most certainly do hold knowledge that others will never know...love the picture, too... great work!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my ...sex with Mother Nature ...will not lay in the tickling grass again in the same way ;) ... i feel unsettled with the binding in unholy sin ... so much of who we are begins with thought eh!? and we all do hide or try to hide a darkness ...addictive desire can be a master ...very intelligent and clever poem ..starting with the title :)
E.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh the desires of the flesh is my favorite... A very tender and sexy piece of poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sensual piece...the dreams may come and when we wake up...we have a cigarette..

i really like "body ravaged by dreams of realms" nice phrasing there.
and the "casket of my cerebral walls"

well done.

j.