~High on Chocogasm

Senses tingle with sinful delight

Don't go near it,it will make you ill.
Stay away,Stay away,its downright evil.
All the warning bells fade,
When i see the caramel cascade.

Brown sin teases my senses,
Its delicious aroma playing havoc
With my jumbling Nots...
Fingers itch for its creamy fringes.
Melting on lusty touch.
Ohh my!! Am i that hot??

Tongue darts out to caress chocolatey lust,
Sweet drops hug my heightened taste buds.
Decandence rolls off my mouth...
Living my guilty pleasure...

Closing my eyes,flying on rapture's wing..
Dreamily lickin' out the carnal confection...
From my greedy lips,
Chocogasm!What a bliss!

Author's Note

As a chocoholic its hard to resist the temptation of tasting this "Food of Gods". Inspite of its power to undo my workout. I love it...Enjoy this chocogasm!!! ;) xx

Reviews

[dartanyon jonez]

I smiled from the top to the bottom of this piece. And then I laughed! This piece just feels good!

"Hi, Sophy Freebirds. My name is dartanyon jonez. And I, too, am a chocoholic."

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh yes I love sweet temptation... chocolate or otherwise...
A tasty little poem your created.

[Saddam]

Stay away with the sweetness like maggy.... Hahaha
kidding.
It is very wonderful write dear, love it.

[A.D Edwards]

Been a while since I reviewed one of ur new pieces, I must say when I read this--Don't go near it,it will make you ill.
Stay away,Stay away,its downright evil.
All the warning bells fade,
When i see the caramel cascade.

It's like you had me at hello lol, good work Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

Gee.. Thanks. :) I will be around to read yours too .

[Einstein Noodle]

delightful ... fun and sensuous treat sensations ... oooooooooo want to kiss those lips ;) now we know the way to your heart girl! ... :)
E.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Heck yeah . Chocolate is my heart. Thank you for your kind words.

[Stephen]

I love it. Definitely a unique way to express your obsession with chocolate. I can taste the chocolate myself and see every bit of the act of eating it. Fortunate thing is, I haven't exercised yet. Let me eat chocolate tonight, and run it off tomorrow. Or not. Haha

[Sophy Freebirds]

This is irresistible. Thank you for your words Steven :)

[Stephen]

Good to have you back friend.

[Marquise]

Brown sin teases my senses, Its delicious aroma playing havoc

PERFECT LINE. NOW IM HUNGRY