~Wandering with the wind

Crave to fly to every corner of the earth

Earth echoes its greeting,
Ripe leaves do its bidding.

A chaste kiss on my eyelids...
Playing with my silky strands...
Tangling it in his wildness,
Wrapping me in breezy whorl...

Kissing my neck,my head tilts..
Engulfing me in his warm built.

Tickle my senses to corridors of ecstacy,
Ablaze the shadows of my dormant frenzy...

Capture every single cell,
Free me from this hell....

Dissolve me in your arms...
Embrace my every qualm.

Take me,with your roar..
Wing me,that i soar.....

Let my each veiled grain wander...
Absorbing nature's essence in wonder....

Author's Note

The weather here is windy today... And after the heat.This was a very welcome change.. Enjoy :) xx

Reviews

[Confuser]

Oh my Sophy Freebirds, it is so beautiful: The beginning beckoning to the earth and then building layers of sensual lure: Tangling it in his wildness, Wrapping me in breezy whorl...I love the surprise entering into line 3: Next: [Ablaze the shadows of my dormant frenzy... Continues to build the picture of excitement]: Take me,with your roar.. Wing me,that i soar..... Again, great metaphors; refined lovely description; fresh (Ha) wrote Flesh: Last stanza is brilliant: love the syllable usage: of wander and wonder and forget about the plea: Let my each veiled grain wander... Absorbing nature's essence in wonder....You are so very talented! Thank you so very much-your words blew me someone in the cosmos. I loved it. Truly beautiful.

[Saddam]

Kissing my neck,my head tilts..
Engulfing me in his warm built.

Tickle my senses to corridors of ecstacy,
Ablaze the shadows of my dormant frenzy..

Simply Beautiful write dear friend.... Amazing smoothness is there, Like it.

[Sophy Freebirds]

thank you dear friend

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Your writing is stunningly beautiful, poetic, vivid with gentle images and wonderful language.

[Sophy Freebirds]

thank you for your kind words :)

[Mai L Nissen]

I love your imagery!
"A chaste kiss on my eyelids.../ Playing with my silky strands..." and "Dissolve me in your arms.../
Embrace my every qualm."
Your words flow beautifully! Very playful write.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww.. Thank you so much Mai.. It means a lot :)