~Wandering with the wind

Crave to fly to every corner of the earth

Earth echoes its greeting,
Ripe leaves do its bidding.

A chaste kiss on my eyelids...
Playing with my silky strands...
Tangling it in his wildness,
Wrapping me in breezy whorl...

Kissing my neck,my head tilts..
Engulfing me in his warm built.

Tickle my senses to corridors of ecstacy,
Ablaze the shadows of my dormant frenzy...

Capture every single cell,
Free me from this hell....

Dissolve me in your arms...
Embrace my every qualm.

Take me,with your roar..
Wing me,that i soar.....

Let my each veiled grain wander...
Absorbing nature's essence in wonder....

Author's Note

The weather here is windy today... And after the heat.This was a very welcome change.. Enjoy :) xx

Reviews

[Confuser]

Oh my Sophy Freebirds, it is so beautiful: The beginning beckoning to the earth and then building layers of sensual lure: Tangling it in his wildness, Wrapping me in breezy whorl...I love the surprise entering into line 3: Next: [Ablaze the shadows of my dormant frenzy... Continues to build the picture of excitement]: Take me,with your roar.. Wing me,that i soar..... Again, great metaphors; refined lovely description; fresh (Ha) wrote Flesh: Last stanza is brilliant: love the syllable usage: of wander and wonder and forget about the plea: Let my each veiled grain wander... Absorbing nature's essence in wonder....You are so very talented! Thank you so very much-your words blew me someone in the cosmos. I loved it. Truly beautiful.

[Nicholas Duboe]

I enjoyed this very much, very descriptive and I love when writers do this because it helps with the whole imagery of the piece. One thing, the 7th stanza, the i needs to be capitalized. Other than that great job!

Also, thanks for taking the time to review my work. Sorry it took so long to get here. I got married on the seventh and went to my honeymoon so I didnt get back until yesterday night. Again I really appreciate it!

[Lydia Shutter]

You have turned the wind into a seductive lover in this write. Kissing you, playing with your hair, hugging you.....oh, yes, the weather can be very enticing. I loved this one. Lydi**

[Sameer]

Woundeful words great feelings and its a celebration of emotions. Very strong poem. Great work Sophie.

[....................]

A sensual piece that whisks us away on a much needed breeze.

[Ehra Khan]

Sophy! This one is a very beautiful and sensual peice.The flow of words is fascinating and so is the imagery. it shows how passionate you are about nature and life! keep it up! looking forward for more:)

[Ehra Khan]

Sophy! This one is a very beautiful and sensual peice.The flow of words is fascinating and so is the imagery. it shows how passionate you are about nature and life! keep it up! looking forward for more:)

[Jamestown]

This is a terrific piece! Very tranquil and passion felt poem, I'm not usually taken
by these types of writes, but this one got me, I must admit I'm very impressed
with this piece, I truly enjoyed reading this and glad I did.
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Confuser]

Gave two reviews??? Anyway thanks again.:D

[Rounak Jain]

That oozed passion to wander with the wind. I could imagine you taking a flight.

[Sophy Freebirds]

thank you so much Rounak