~To Daddy with love ~

The only man who can bring me to knees

Swimming in the depths
Of your sage eyes....
I swirl and twist till
I reach the abyss
With a rosy dye.

Hailing the morning
The sunflower bows
It stands still as
Roaring wind blows.
Petals buried in,
The ignorant sands.
Scent haunts the bed,
Waving it End!

The lonely slope stands aloof,
Casting stats a haughty look.
Forlorn breeze blows across,
Shivers under cold caress.

Tender sunshine baths it in love,
The Old rock smiles with a nod.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem the day i had gone to accompany him in his retirement from job.The scenic charm on way spoke to me.So its dedicated to my Supercool dad... :) xoxo proud to be daddy's girl

Reviews

[Marquise]

Hailing the morning
The sunflower bows
It stands still as
Roaring wind blows.
Petals buried in,
The ignorant sands.
Scent haunts the bed,

Geez. i hope my daughter grows up and writes a a poem like this for me one day :-(


great job

[Antoñyo]

A splendid tribute in vivid color and artistry.
Thanks for sharing!