~Voyage to the Unknown....

When persona comes awake to psyche's call..

Moon's clock strikes midnight;
Conciousness fades away ....
In the uncertain mist....

Persona comes wake to psyche's call,
Burying the huge mast of sentient thoughts...
Taken on this voyage of Unknown Destination;
Caged in this whirlwind of trepidation...

My mind's eye opens to a sight.....

Ashen faces void of any emotion;
Lips sewn in black thread of premonition....
Forbidden to give away their thoughts.....
They shake their heads in mock Nods...

Shrouded in Dawn's budding twilight,
My subconscious is gifted with Foresight....

Adorned with Augury for the future,
I have some flairs yet to nurture..
While travelling through this critical juncture....

~Sophy Freebirds ©

Author's Note

Gift of foresight is granted to some.But they don't give away everything. Enjoy!! ;)

Reviews

[Stephen]

I really liked this one as well of course. Great imagery. It exercised my imagination and really took me into the dream realm and made me feel as if I was there. fantastic job!!!!

[Sophy Freebirds]

glad i could tickle your mind :)

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Extremely good choice of words. Perfect breaks and you know what, I simply like it...wait, I LOVE it... :) :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww. Thank you so much D

[Parimal Pratyush]

Wow. This has such a great flow to it. The diction and rhyming must be appreciated as well. Very well chosen words for a great deep thought. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.

[Naina]

Very nice work Sophie..... I really like the concept and your way of writing is justttt, I had already told you.. I really like it....... :))

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww.. thank you Naina.will be coming for your works too :)

[Naina]

your most welcome sweetheart....:))

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

A splendid way of describing the unknown, i could relate to every line and word...Caged in this whirlwind of trepidation...Love this line so much...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you K.L . glad you could connect :)

[Sunya]

awesome use of words :) the gift of foresight would be a real pain
love the first three lines cuz they are just brilliant
great write Sophy :)
-Sunya

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much sunya :)

[Ashira Macy]

A voyage through your mind to predict outcomes. Brilliant metaphors throughout this piece girl, you really blew me out of the water with this one. I feel like every poem I read of yours just keeps getting more and more fantastic.

[Sophy Freebirds]

That means i am improving.. lol :D.. thank you so much dear.. delighted you enjoyed it

[Eve Ola]

a beautiful sight and amazing write. Welldone Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much Eve :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much Eve :)

[Eve Ola]

your welcome dear

[Aprille]

I love it. :) .. made me think if you have the gift of foresight. ^_^
The poem for me screams freedom, free to think and can see everything, cannot be restrained -- voyage to the unknown where some people will never know. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Lol.. yes i do have it :)... i thank god for it .. thank you so much sweety ..glad you liked it.

[Aprille]

A blessing indeed. :)
And you're welcome. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sophy, this has that dream like quality of free thinking to it. Nurturing a few of the seeds that blow through the cornfields of out minds and letting them sprout.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow!! Thank you for your insightful review John... :)