~My Shadow....

This is for you Nikhi just for you.. xoxo

Li'l fights for chocolate tart...
Competing on who will run far...
Snatching the best dress to wear to the party..
Teasing each other when one turns dirty...

Nights up in the terrace
Laying on our backs,
Watching the constellations far...
We wish as we see a fallen star...

Childishly i wished for you to go so far..
That i could have every candy bar..

Now standing under this moonless sky..
I sigh....
As i see a lonely star falling by..
I pray for you to -come back...
Just please come back....

What to do?? When i am sad
I squeeze the pillow
But it doesn't hug me back...

Pl....please come back didu....
Your chotu needs you so bad...

Author's Note

I love my elder sister( didu) the most.I love you didu.It is just a simple poem dedicated to the person i love the most whom i miss the most.. :(.. she is my shadow and will always be never leaving me in darkness

Reviews

[Stephen]

Wow. This is the most meaningful poem I have read of yours. I could feel the emotions behind it and made me feel teary eyed. The trait I admired in poets or writers is the power they have to pull out of the reader the emotions that are portrayed in the writing. You really did that here. Awesome work!

[Frieda P]

I can't review this one, my eyes are welling up, so much affecting poetry on the cafe today, I felt this one to my core Sophy, you own my heart in this moment in time....xo

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww... :( i miss her.. thank you Freida

[Frieda P]

I know that feeling well...sigh. Sending you a safe squishy hug. ♥

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much ;) ★ hugs back at you★

[anne]

I remembered my sis reading this one....such a sweet relationship....dresses, dreams, chocolates....everything about this relation is so sweet...beautiful pic...I wish you meet your sister soon and have a lovely time....the words are poured from heart....even the memories are precious...god bless you both....beautiful girl gang...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much Anne.. your wishes mean a lot ;) wish you the same

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

This is sweet and moving... very nice capture of a feeling and a time in your life. You shared it nicely. People touch us and leave little fingerprints don't they? Good one.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ahh.. yes.!! Thank you so much ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow a very touching poem, when we keep loved ones in our heart they are never far away… I was moved by your poem.

[Sophy Freebirds]

:) thank you so much Dale.Delighted you felt it

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most very welcome.