Brood of Vipers...

Fact and fiction interwoven by this breed

Masked in sober expression..
Following the anti- social etiquette..
Brood of vipers,flooding their ...
Venom in the social banquet...

Sprinkly the truth with fiction's salt
Blending it with envious twisted knot..
Serving it with mouth- watering temptation..
The foolish ravish it, serving knave's intentions...

Just follow the universal rule..
Throw crumbs of food to the jealous fools..
Famished they will sate their rotten souls..

When you will reach your desired goal
They will appease you with their wagging tails..
Retriving their brains,when they fail....

Author's Note

I hate rumour mongers.. so here is a write related to 'em... Reviews invited :) hope you like it

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Brood of vipers,flooding their ...
Venom in the social banquet... Yes, that pretty much sums it up Sophy...I wish this piece did not remind me of the current state of the site as much as it does, but to me it feels very much like where this place is at these days...your imagery as always is lacerating...your poetic voice is one of unequivocal conviction...you just know how to get right to the heart of the matter, and stay there...the first two lines actually sound a bit like me, reluctant as I am to admit it...I only wish my sober expression was a mask, but that's another story haha Another winner my friend :)

[Matching Socks]

I agree, rumour mongers are indeed like poisonous snakes. Spreading crumbs, feeding lies for their own self gain.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Ana ;) glad you liked it

[JordanIsaacSmith]

Fantastic poem. Great flow and very interesting. Not too many ways to interpret it (an observation, not a critique). Great bit of writing overall.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Jordan ;) I accept both critique and compliments.. so no worries

[R Smith]

you state the case perfectly, yes I have worked in environments where rumour is king and sucking on this straw of mis-information is a part of everyday life that so many love to indulge, well written Sophy.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yea rumour sucks!!Thank you Richard..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow, I love the raw nature of this poem… no sugar coating here… those who spread rumors and people who are unhappy with themsleves so they need to make sure everyone else is too.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh yea.. Agreed. ;) thank you Dale

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome :))

[anne]

Masked in sober expression..
Following the anti- social etiquette..
Brood of vipers,flooding their ...
Venom in the social banquet...
...great work...:))

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you dearie :)

[Samantha Ann Marie]

I... really f*****g like this.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much :)

[Samantha Ann Marie]

Yea for sure, is the rest of your stuff like this too?

[Sophy Freebirds]

Well you can check it out ;) i am a person of varying taste..

[Sunya]

Reminds me of songs 'Dogs', 'Sheep' and 'Pigs' from Pink Flyod, rebellious writing :) greatly mixed it with a social gathering :) love your writing :D

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. thank you so much dear ;)