~Mystic Eclipse...

Soft moonbeams filtering through the dark canopy...
Dancing to the darkling's melodious tune...
She moves accompanied by shimmering white hue..
With dark hair synonymous to the night...
Captivating sloe eyes dance with moon so bright...

Carried by the delicate pale rays...
Forming wings in a dreamy haze..
Chilly night air blows her silk cream dress..
Touching her cold moon...
She forgets the sun in noon
Carressing and savouring his soft pale skin
Accepting him with every blemish

Earth accuses her of eclipsing shadow...
She sadly smiles and leaves the divine crescendo...
Gently whispering to the harmonic wind...
"Shadows are formed when light is akin"

Flying across the massive cosmic sky...
She nods as she passes stars of Ara by...

Author's Note

Here "ARA-THE STARS OF SACRIFICE",Zeus made this stars when his allies offered him sacrifice by creating an Altar to pledge their alliegance during Titan war.. This poem is symbolically penned.. :) Enjoy....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Create good places and visions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stephen]

Has a very beautiful, calming effect.

[Tom]

The mystic and enigma of the night time sky has intrigued and preoccupied mankind for millennia, such is the vastness of the celestial universe!

A cosmic, stellar piece of poetry Sophy, imaginatively expressive indeed !

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. thank you so much Tom :)

[RAOrourke]

She moves accompanied by shimmering white hue..
With dark hair synonymous to the night...love the visuals you bring to your pieces! Nice job

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much :)

[Lyan]

nicely written, great imagery:)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you ;)

[Naina]

very beautiful poem sophy.. Needn't to say that you are really good at rhyming... Beautifuly written..:)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much Naina. :)

[Naina]

your most welcome sophy...:)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

beautiful imagery... loved it...

its so warm as a gentle hug...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Swaroop ;)

[Matching Socks]

Loved this one, reading the authors note really breathes a new light into it.
Lovely way of painting a picture for the reader. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. thank you Ana :)

[Enayet1999]

Brilliant, i especially love how you open your open. You use strong words! Well done
Your poem is very intriguing

[Sophy Freebirds]

I am humbled. Thank you so much :)

[Enayet1999]

Love you xx And it's all right. Despite i just met you

[Enayet1999]

May i ask if you can review my writing

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww so sweet ;)

[Enayet1999]

i don't understand- what did i do?

[Sunya]

The third paragraph is just so beautiful :) the use of words is awesome :) beautifully written

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much.. looking forward to reviewing you too ;)