~Blood Tears...

Beautifully broken,majestically mended

Snowflakes flutter across my eyelashes as
Last charred tear flows down my red cheek...
Dropping down to the cup of agony...
Reverbating is the loudest whisper in cold land...
Gulping it down,it burns my parched throat...
As hemlock resurrected socrates soul...

Dark vision blurries my eyes around...
A gust of chilly wind knocks me to the ground...

Reliving the dark tunnel of memories...
Your every carress a merciless whip...
Your passionate kiss shaming Judas's kiss...
Curling in my bosom as cleopatra's asp...
Draining me of my last lovely gasp...

My soul writhes under sky of vain...
Echoing through the clouds of pain...
Did you get any silver in gain??

I bury my heart in the hellish flames..
Choking my emotions in unicorn's reign...
Tapping my trust forever in pandora's box...

My lonely soul tears,bloodied with betrayal's smear...
There...
Escapes an anguished freezed BLOOD TEAR....

Author's Note

I don't write depressing poems .. But every day has its night.. So here is a piece of my work from a moment of my life.. Feel!! ;)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Blood tears are always emotive, I knew right off this one was going to be affecting, I felt this one to the core of my bones Sophy. I realize this about betrayal but it took me to another place in time...

Gulping it down,it burns my parched throat...
As hemlock resurrected socrates soul...

Killer lines...wish I would have written those...you never disappoint dearheart!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow.. cupcake thank you for the sweet review.. i am so humbled :)

[Naina]

very well written sophy...... N I would like to say onething that you are really very good at rhyming.. very beautiful poem which is exactly describing its name BLOOD TEAR... keep writing...:)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much Naina :) i am glad you liked it

[Naina]

pleasure is mine...:)

[anne]

This is something which I have never seen in your words....darkness....surrounded by so many Shakespeare character it kept bound to the last word and it feels.....
My soul writhes..............Blood tear....its affecting .....you have done a great job with your words......

[Sophy Freebirds]

If you want darkness in my words check out my previous writings :) thank you so much sweetie

[Sophy Freebirds]

And they are all greek and armaic Amiga... though shakespear has mentioned them in his plays :)

[anne]

You words has a deep impact howsoever they are written... :)I will definitely check out... :)

[anne]

Ohh....but what is armaic????

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh so sorry it armenic..language in which bible was written.Thank you chica ★takecare★

[anne]

hmm...a new word for me....thank you Sophy..:))

[Lyan]

good work! it is good to let feelings out.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Lyan :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This was quite a journey here. The sky of vain stood out to me and choking my emotions in unicorn's reign. Dark yes and fantasy rich. Awesome wordage and deliverance.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Whoa !! Thank you Joshua.glad tpo see you on my page :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Your welcome. ^^

[Ashira Macy]

Wow girl, I did not expect this coming from you, you are really showing us all your different sides. This was so well done. The imagery throughout this piece was gruesome and haunting and you can feel the agony in the words so clearly.

Reliving the dark tunnel of memories...
Your every carress a merciless whip...
Your passionate kiss shaming Judas's kiss...
Curling in my bosom as cleopatra's asp...
Draining me of my last lovely gasp...

This stanza was teeming with information that just called out to me... Judas's kiss, Cleopatra's asp, just... wow woman! And the rhyme scheme made it read very smoothly as well.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow Ashira.. thank you for your encouraging words :) Me too discovering myself with this

[Cory Barrett]

Stinkis of pain wrapped in an empty Jasmine carcass. Really well written

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow.. thank you so much for your kind words :)

[raj24]

see i told you.. everyday you surprise me with something new about you... this one is as emotional as anything possibly can be...this was beautiful for me.. i was just going through your words in my heart.. the ghost of memories keep on haunting us.. as every tear fall we smile wondering whether we were right or wrong.. we try to break through it only to realize out heart is still not ready to part away from those memories... there is nothing like betrayal for me.. i just feel maybe someone felt they are better off without us.. we cant stop them.. no matter how much we love them or try to hold them.. they will go away.. so its better we make ourselves strong to let our soul live with peace.. i love being in love ,even with those people who have hurt me.. thanks for sharing Sophy :)

Raj

[Sophy Freebirds]

See.. what posting this makes you think i am weak.. :p.. i am tough as iron or else i would have been a gloomy now.. ha.. thank you Raj for your thoughtful review ... ★ take care wanna- be- prey★

[raj24]

not weak Sophy.. not weak.. weak people cant share their pain.. u r strong tigress.. very strong :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow.. i am flaterred.. thanks yaa :) For your support.Do appreciate it.

[raj24]

maine read kar li :)