~Aurora of Perceptions~

Charged thoughts,magnetic muse....

In this massive stretch of cold land...
My wandering charged thoughts...
Attracted to magnetic imbued muse...

Followed by a luminous bath
In my stark polar life...
Blending in the gloomy sky...
With the amalgation of...
Sparkling golden and inky blue...

Giving my pen a soothing hue..
Culminating it with crowning dew...

Author's Note

Just a different interpretation of poetry.According to me it is my refuge. hope you Aurora.. :)

Reviews

[Stephen]

Very interesting poem. I love it!!!! I read a poem early that you wrote that was very similar as far as the message behind it. Thanks for sharing

[J. Land]

One picky note: I believe you mean "amalgamation" in the 7th line instead of "amalgation."

This is beautifully intense. It seethes a bit under the languid tone, a contrast between the coldness of life and relief of writing, creating. You're a true prodigy, Sophy.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yeah... i guess you are right.:p.. thank you so much

[Happy hours]

thats why i reffered you as "amazing poet" :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. !! Thank you ;)

[Happy hours]

you're welcome dear

[Tom]

Wonderful expressive imagery as always Sophy and this one is super electrically charged to alluring magnetic effect !

[Sophy Freebirds]

Glad you were magnetically pulled :) thank you Tom.

[lee_jang]

Hi i'm not good at poems but yes, you did a great job in describing the picture to us.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. thank you so much ;)

[Lyan]

nice work! really liked the last two lines the best: "giving my pen a soothing hue, culminating it with crowing dew."

[Sophy Freebirds]

Gracias amigo :)

[Lyan]

ur welcome, but it's amiga:) lol.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ouch... i didn't get it from your name :p...

[Lyan]

it's alright, no worries^_^

[joshua deathdealer]

This is very nice. Beautiful actually. Flows well along with an abundance of vivid imagery.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww... thank you so much Joshua :)

[raj24]

penning down something in that sort of place.....that will be fun...i dont know what thoughts i will be going through at that time but with such a beautiful picture i think i will prefer to remain calm and enjoy the flow of thoughts...i loved these lines..they created a wonderful picture for me...
With the amalgamation of...
Sparkling golden and inky blue...

thanks for sharing Sophy :)

Raj

[Sophy Freebirds]

It is what poetry is for me.. :) attracted towards my inspiration results in my writing. Thank you for reviewing Raj :)

[Matching Socks]

Stunning write my friend. The sights are amazing btw, truly incredible to witness.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh.. thank you Ana.Can you check out the poem "the super seven".There is a surprise for you in there.. :P