~Her Masked Desire...

Drowning in her hunger

The ghost town rising from the dust,
As she stalks through the dark streets,
Holding herself tighter,
Aiming her gaze lower...
Under the lustful glances of vulgar.

Tired of being unblemished..
She wished to be ravished..
Finding him - an oasis in the desert.
She throws away all her comfort!!

Taken by her carnal desire...
She soothes her salacious fire..
Drugged in his evil gaze..
She swims in the mirage..

Shattered is her haven in a second..
When he squeezes her thumping heart in his brutal hands...

Draining her of life's unfeeling emotions..
Realizing her own self deprivation..

Imbued with seething rage..
Mourning,igniting the frigid flame..
In her own wanton hunger caged..

Eager to be unravelled as a bottle of champagne ..
She is sloshed and drained in her own terrain..
Exploited and smashed in the dumped trash...

Now in the streets of sloe- eyed beauties...
She does her whorish nightly duties...

Author's Note

I wanted to write something haunting.. here is a poem based oñ a girl who followed her wanton desires unaware of the impending doom... hope you will like it..

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Well you certainly achieved your goal quite nicely Sohpy, and I think you've been reading too much erotica for your own good hon....all kidding aside, this is not only haunting but raw emotion on your page, what we think we covet is not always what we truly desire, that's what fantasies are for....as always you amaze me!! Killer ending...that's money. Outstanding, very affecting....

her all comfort think you mean 'all her comfort' or not....

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yep.. i will correct it ASAP ;) thank you so much Freida

[Frieda P]

Of course, I especially like the pivoting point in your poem...

Shattered is her haven in a second..
When he squeezes her thumping heart in his brutal hands...

It's all downhill from there.

[Frieda P]

Just noticed SSADD said the same....it's affecting. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh yea.. i was in a gloomy mood and your and K.K 's poems instilled in me the dark desire so here it goes :p... Belated Happy Birthday N***a.Just read Ana's tribute.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, you do gloomy impeccably well.... :)

[Saddam]

Shattered is her haven in a second..
When he squeezes her thumping heart in his
brutal hands...

ha... that's real nice. Really good one.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you dear poet..

[Saddam]

you are best. Most welcome dear Poet.