~Being Classy N***a!!

Be repulsive yet seductive

Don't be a bimbo,
Be a teasing tornado..
Catalysing his libido..

Though,be a lady with class,
Never shattering as a glass.
Be cool and calm,
Have a defiant charm..

Like a fire kindled..
Attracting moths..
Scathing them with
A killer look!!

Let 'em call you twin or crazy;
Hold your head as you walk baby!!

© 2014 Sophy Freebirds

Author's Note

One of my girlfriends had a bit of insecurity regarding her look and personality.. i wrote this to boost her up.. Just a scribble. Hope you will like it.Fingers crossed. :) For a gonna be- killer in heels. ;)

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Frieda P

Oh man oh man... you pushed all the buttons here, not sure 'repulsive' is as far as you wanna go, but I catch your drift Sophy, a little moxy goes a long way...kick up those stilettos!

...umm, N***a,
really, you're so not PC dear, why has no one mentioned it I wonder...brave world you live in gorgeous!! ;)

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10 Years Ago

Oh geez, should I be afraid? ;)

10 Years Ago

Umm... kinda yes ;) you should be excited... check it out after an hour or two.. It will be posted

10 Years Ago

I might need a nap first after all that cake last night. ;)

raj24

i loved it :)..n i feel your friend must have enjoyed it too..i liked the first line..dont be a bimbo, be a teasing tornado.....that was teasing..:) well written Sophy:)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Yepp... :) gracias Raj

Edward Lancheister

good provoking poem.

Let 'em call you twin or crazy;
Hold your head as you walk baby!!

those lines are my favorites. proud with ourself and being ourself

thanks for share

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thanks Edward.. Glad you liked it :)

Tom

Class with charisma, yea, that's the way to go!

Sound poetic advice, pertinently and purposefully penned Sophy!

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Ohh wow.. see who is back.Thanks Tom :)

anne

the selection of words here was marvellous....so beautifully written with an amazing title.....I like your all work dedicated and dealing with the wonderful community of woman.....don't ever want the woman to be weak and your feminist quality in your poems appeals to the bottom of my heart.......I loved the stanza.......Though,be a lady with class
Never shatter like a glass
Be cool and calm
Have a defiant charm......
I think all girls should read that.......there is power in your voice and let your words keep shining and so my woman......

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Wow.. i am humbled Anne. ;) thank you so much

Matching Socks

Great write Sophy!
Love the message here.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ana .. :)

jacob erin-cilberto

a really good scribble...again all the paradoxes...the contradiction---

like in the song, "she's a walking contradiction, partly fact and partly fiction"

but either way, she struts her stuff...a killer look and that killer burn to turn his world inside out.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

Well.. we need to wait for his reply.. ha... lets see how he defends himself or turns to be the scap.. read more

10 Years Ago

Lol. He's not here. So must be guilty.

10 Years Ago

Yea i guess.. he is now charged with the crime to be mean.. ;) hiding somewhere

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Added on July 29, 2014
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Sophy Freebirds

Balangir, Odisha, India

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Christened as Sophy i try to live up to this name.Introduction is something i am never good at.But if you want to know me,read me. My Real name is Ankita Sagar.Will be turning 19 soon this Septembe.. more..