Imagine

Imagine your lips entwined with mines savoring the taste of each other's tongues
Imagine our bodies moving together as if we were making a song
Imagine our eyes all over each other as if we were under a spell
Imagine your hands caressin my body through every spot and everywhere.

Imagine you whispering in my ears how much you love me
Imagine as I'm being yours just wanting you to touch me
Imagine the whispers, imagine the screams
Imagine all the fantasies and the making love on the beach.

Imagine the sand all over our bodies
Imagine loving each other passionately
Imagine the sweet kisses
Just imagine the perfect love scene.

Imagine our heart beating together making a song till eternity. <3

Author's Note

What do you think..? Feedback? Constructive criticism?

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

Beautiful passion seeps through this writing. I don't have a thing critical to say and I even went back and read it twice after reading your note to make sure! It was wonderful, got me to thinking about my perfect "love" moment...inspiring! Thanks!

xxoxx

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful, passionate, stunning.

[Poetry child]

I think it's a sweet n passionate vision
The reader imagines when reading this :)
Nicely done - though I did catch a lil disjointness in the flow at about
The halfway point still it was a sweet n tender ink :)

[ravena]

nice passion

[Hippy]

very passionate just a few problems with grammar and spelling but they are minor issues other words very sweet

[Charles D. Moorer]

nice but check the spelling of mines, should be mine

[Voice11]

I love it. It has it's own natural beat to it and flows nicely. Good job.

[Tomi]

Fantasies... it's got a good flow, but i see some breaks in the thought at some point, e.g ...Imagine the whispers, imagine the screams...the preceding lines talk about something gentle, quiet etc. then a scream? otherwise i think its a good one.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words flowed like music. The imagination is the key. What we think create the need and emotion to feel and create great desire. The poem is beautiful. We must hold on to passion to keep our hope alive. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Fallen Angel]

i love the imagery, it reminds me of what you would see at the begining of a movie, i read it and see flashes of two young passionate lovers.. great job