Feeling a bit Wise today, Just some thoughts

To dream, to have hope, to see the light when the whole room is dark, to be able to reach the stars without having to fly, to fly and never again touch the ground that wouldn’t let us survive. To block every negative thought out of our mind, to put in our minds that we can survive and make a change in our lives. To breathe when there’s no more air left, to walk even when we only got one leg. All we need is a little push in life to do what we want to, when we want to do it. To be who we want to be, because we have the choice TO BE OR NOT TO BE. To shine like the light, or be plain like the darkness, to reach for the stars when everyone else is reaching for the sky. Whoever said sky is the limit is wrong, higher than the sky, is the universe and the universe holds the stars so when we reach for something, we should reach for the stars, the universe is the limit, unless there’s something higher than that in life. So whoever said we can’t make it is just plain wrong, we can do anything as long as we can make the long run. There will be bumps along the way, but no one said the Road to success would be a piece of cake.

By: Sofia Nunez

Author's Note

Any thoughts ?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Most things worthwhile take hard work and a lot of time. I like your out look at life. Last line is very old and it still true today. "But no-one said the road to success would be a piece of cake." A strong story. Thank you.
Coyote

[Charles D. Moorer]

interesting

[Camille Corbett]

Okay, I like your voice and style. So don't bog it down with unoriginal cliches, because it distracts from the beauty of your voice. Overall good job for a beginner.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Deep thoughts! You truly have an old soul there don't you? I like that you are trying to ask the questions that we all find ourselves facing. These words resonate with us all. Kewl write!

[Voice11]

I like your thoughts. Reaching High, but does that mean in everything?

[GunMetal]

I like this. Inspiration, shining with positive hope. And I have to agree with Rain Kissed Secret. The understanding of one emotional extreme often helps us learn to appreciate the other.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I only have one disagreement. And that is not to ignore the pain, the misery, or everything else that is negative. You have to be able to.. zero in on what you want, really honestly dear to god want. And to do that, you have to know what you don't want. What you hate, what you don't appreciate. You have to figure out you.. and the bad things change that every time you come across one. So my advice is to see the bad things. You'll be fine as long as you don't let them consume you.
Other then that you did a very good job. I wouldn't rewrite a thing because what I have above is just something that I believe.

Good luck with your writing.
Rain

[SamBug]

Very inspirational!

[Dutch Jr.]

Inspiring words. This work spells inspiration. I believe that at birth we all have the same chances to be great at whatever it is we decide to do, regardless of the home we go to when we leave the hospital room. You said it best, its not easy by any means, but impossible is nothing.