I want your love forever

Deep Feelings

Ever since I laid eyes on you, the flame was turned on and the candle still has a long way to go. Every since I saw that look in your eyes, I was sure you were the one.

 And when I heard your sweet voice, I got the tingles on my skin. Ever since I kiss those pink soft lips I was struck by their sweetness, I was hypnotized by their taste. Ever since I fell in love with you, everything in my life has changed.

You are everything I have ever wanted and more beautiful than the sea, and if to love you is a sin then I'm the biggest sinner that there has ever been.  And if tomorrow there's no more us, you will always remain in my heart, because wherever there's fire there are ashes left behind.

But what I am sure about is that I want a future with you because I have never been so sure that I truly love you. And as time passes by, my love for you grows, and grows and grows as hard as a stone, that many can smash it but yet no one can break, You are the only one in my life that gives me so many feelings to emerge.

And all this feelings are like an ongoing river that it runs and never stops, and they are the most beautiful feelings God has ever created on earth. 

You are my sun, you are my shine, and is a delight to call you mines.

You are my smiles, my happy tears, you are the love I never feared.

You are my story, you are my soul, you are the lyrics to my favorite song.

And with these words, I give you my all, I give you my heart, I give you my soul.

Now all I ask for you is to hold it tight, to never mistreat it and to love it right.

Cause' is your love that I want forever, But if forever is not enough, then I desire your love, enough to fly to heaven. <3

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

"You are my sun, you are my shine, and is a delight to call you mines.
You are my smiles, my happy tears, you are the love I never feared.
You are my story, you are my soul, you are the lyrics to my favorite song." wow this is beautifully written from the heart and soul. loved the ending too. great ink :)

[A.Lee]

This is good! You expressed yourself very well in this piece. Nice work!

[Dutch Jr.]

Looooovvvee it! I write fiction, mostly crime, but I really want to be able to write romance. You are pretty good with written expression... Good job