The Stars are Alive

The Stars are Alive

A Poem by Petrichor
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A night with the special someone

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When the stars shine down
and strike your face
you've never been more beautiful.
You shine.
You glow.
The stars are alive inside you.
Dancing.
Twirling.
Swirling.
Till the night ends and they are no more.
But tonight, I promise, my love,
that the stars will come back and
you will light up the world.

© 2014 Petrichor


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I love the connection of love and light. Both very filling and bright. I also enjoy your use of descriptive language. It's nicely written and has a beautiful flow. Thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Again the magic is done......Very Well written poem.....TrUlY..!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really beautiful piece of writing. It captures love and exhilaration. I love how you list multiple descriptive words, and how your poem is teeming with light and tangible love. Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Petrichor

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!

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Petrichor
Petrichor

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I'm 14 for now. I enjoy photography, music, writing, and reading. I believe that photography is a way to express yourself. Not just to "capture the moment," but to show your true self to the outside w.. more..

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