Silent.

Silent.

A Poem by Sophia V

Silent and dark.
There is no noise.
But the images I see are loud enough.
His hands on me and his warm body.
I squirm to get away but where's to escape? 
hands everywhere.
touching.
silence.
"help me" I scream but where is my voice?
where did it go?
why can't I speak?
more movement occurs,
but it's all big blur,
in the end i am speechless.
silent.
there's nothing to say. 

© 2016 Sophia V


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love has many forms... to beloved, but when it gets totally outta control, only one lang. of love is left behind which sadistically belongs to "seduction"...
... the hunger of heart allows one's body either to please or to demolish other's body just to feed desperation. and when the love without consent & the feelings without consideration be harshly drift away over the night, even the LOVE itself becomes speechless to have it turned into lustful vibes. so dark. & horrific poetry you've come up with. today, half of this world's much into such pleasurable things which further lead 'em wrong. rape. crime. assault. lust & desperation is all what today's youth want rather tryna understand or valuing the worth of LOVE. ah.. so much depth is hidden behind ur work. very dark. & horrified! nicely written, though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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you beautifully described what other girls and women feels while been attacked , they want to scream but just can't

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moving words. You limn just what is needed and there is much feeling and imagery. Nicely penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That is a very strongly felt poetry! You portrayed the despair and the disturbance very realistically. I could feel the pain and helplessness in each line. The aches left behind by one's lust and the no-escape point has been depicted through your words very sensitively. Well Done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


love has many forms... to beloved, but when it gets totally outta control, only one lang. of love is left behind which sadistically belongs to "seduction"...
... the hunger of heart allows one's body either to please or to demolish other's body just to feed desperation. and when the love without consent & the feelings without consideration be harshly drift away over the night, even the LOVE itself becomes speechless to have it turned into lustful vibes. so dark. & horrific poetry you've come up with. today, half of this world's much into such pleasurable things which further lead 'em wrong. rape. crime. assault. lust & desperation is all what today's youth want rather tryna understand or valuing the worth of LOVE. ah.. so much depth is hidden behind ur work. very dark. & horrified! nicely written, though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A desperate place is described in the poem. Being trapped and no control. A bad place to be. Thank you Sophia for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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