Bye, Sly Guy

Far or near, your words I hear,

But oh my dear, you are no fear.

a simple peer, though you may sneer,

I decide the fate of my own year,

it is now clear that my year will not tear,

not even a little. 

from your words like spears.

You, the one who once put smiles on my face,

are not who I remember.

You've changed, and so have I.

I've switched lanes, so goodbye.

You can't hurt me anymore,

as you said, 

you closed the door,

and so have I,

so goodbye, sly guy, goodbye.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

that's intriguing!
it's simply more like a fascinating poetry that speaks the heart in words. every pain -- the ache of life you nicely transform or transmitting in thoughts by spiking it all with ejaculation of your montenegro feelings. nicely done!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome......
amazing wordplay.....
the first stanza.........like throwing swear words in a rhyme....like you don't even care to give him even a little attention........
the second stanza.......getting serious.....and with intent getting your main thought across.....and then again, kill with alliterating goodbyes.......

subtle.....
beautifully done....
absolutely loved it!!!!
:)
p.s. i know i have babbled on..........if you decide not to forgive me.......i demand my alliterations......lol.....