Sweet Servitude

There's Heaven in her smile.
He sees it.
He seeks it.
And when she lets him,
He drowns in it.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A delightful piece of brevity. Well penned sonnie.

Chris

[sonnie ibadah]

Thank you Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[JR]

Perfect little piece. We're all looking to drown in someone, so I could connect with this easily. Funny how it always seems to be on someone else's terms though, that little bit of Heaven... I like how sparse you kept this. No need to expand, you grabbed a big idea in a very little poem.

[sonnie ibadah]

Thanks JR, glad you enjoyed it!