SAVING SUPERMAN

i feel the walls come crashing down inside, somebody save me!

In his eyes is a story none can explain.
Beyond the fierce disguise,
I see tears uncried,
the echo of words unspoken.
I feel the world weighing down on him,
yet, he battles not to bleed
but struggles to heed,
the desperate cries for a hero,
Him, a tired soul flagging his wounded wing,
comes tumbling down, screaming,
but making no sound, falling.
Gone is a hero renown.
But I hear you.
I feel you.
I’ll save you.

Hold on to me and I’ll keep you warm.
Let me mend your broken wing
to your fading soul, strength I’ll bring.
I’ll wipe away your tears
and fight away our fears.
Because I hear you.
I feel you.
Like countless times you did,
I’ll save you.

Reviews

[Confuser]

I suppose the superman was an inspiration, but all I felt was beauty and empathy in the most lovliest of words all spoken calmly and tenderly telling one and of humanity to follow your example, the smooth, effortless way you write is nothing short of amazing. Thank you.

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you so much for your wonderful review :)

[Confuser]

It is great writing. Y/W.

[wordman]

the worlds hero for as long as I can remember. you made him human,great job

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Pax]

This made me feel that heroes too needs saving, they needed help too.... your words flows so smoothly, I adore your work... great piece!

[sonnie ibadah]

thanks a lot for reading ;)

[Pax]

you are most welcome in all.... :)

[Chris Atkinson]

Another beautiful piece Sonnie, expressed and descibed perfectly. You have a fantastic tallent and I realy love your writing :)

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you so much chris, i'm glad you enjoy my writing ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes even the hero needs saving.Excellent poetry Sonnie :)

[sonnie ibadah]

yeah, you're right. thank u vidya ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[John Anderson]

Very nicely expressed...well done as usual, my friend!

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you john,