when i let go..

when one get the sense of loving and let go

Think of it as karma or just a simple nightmare
When i cease to be the person that once cared
It will hurt, i know 'casue i've been there
Though my dissapointment and your regrets can't compare
It will feel like a million knives piercing through your heart when i leave you
And like cold linger of absence where i touched you
You will cry many rivers and be all blue
But it will not bring back what once was true
When you search to hear my voice you'll only get echoing silence
While the demons inside of you scream my name with violence
I won't be there when you close your eyes
Or be in front of you to say goodbye
It wont be this mouth pouring promises to your heart
But it will be these hands pouring salt to your cuts....

Author's Note

it may sound cold but that's how i sometimes feel about the people in my life...people come and go like seasons, the don't need a reason so i learn to let go...

Reviews

[Cassy Samuels]

Long time Sonnie...I understand your poem. Your expressions are flawless and it'll hurt letting go.
Thanks for sharing this piece...Am shelving this!
Cassy Samuels

[sonnie ibadah]

you're so kind cassy, thanks alot....

[Raymond Federle]

This poem is so true...wonderful! How have you been...have not seen you recently. :)

[sonnie ibadah]

thanx 4 the review ray...i've been so busy wit examz lately, but dnt worry i'll be back soon....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Happy New Year sonnie:) Yes we all feel this way.It hurts to feel so maybe if we could make ourself care about nothing maybe it would'nt hurt so bad.Lovely my friend :)