Nightfall/Breaking Dawn

Before the dawn breaks,
I would fall in love with you,
I would readily surrender to what I feel is true.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would give my heart away,
just to spend with you my nights and days.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would give you my all,
just so deeply you’d fall.

Before the dawn breaks,
you would fulfill my desires,
with your wildest charms, you’d put out the fire.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would lose my vision,
and forget all about my mission.

Before the dawn breaks,
you would break my heart,
with unbearable pain, I would fall apart.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would cry me a river,
so great to go down with a fever.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would blame myself,
for stupidly sacrificing myself.

Before the dawn breaks,
I would hate you,
with infinite contempt, I would curse you.

BUT;

Before the night falls,
I would forget the pain,
and with great pride,I’d smile again.

Before the night falls,
I would laugh at the thought,
of the resentment you’d have brought.

Before the night falls,
I would deliver myself,
from mistake just like yourself.

Before the night falls,
I would delete the memories,
and I’d have no worries.

Before the night falls,
I would pursue my happiness,
and soon get rid of my sadness.

Before the night falls,
I would forget you,
and to myself I'll be true.

Before the night falls,
I would re-build my faith,
and no longer would I trust in fate.

Before the night falls,
I would mend my heart,
and have a fresh start.

Before the night falls,
I would fall in fall in love again,
but this time, I’d be the one causing pain!

Author's Note

so, watchu think?

Reviews

[Chris Atkinson]

Fantastic poem Sonnie. Beautiful words, heart felt and perfectly writen.

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you Chris :)

[ProCoacoa]

This poem is an emotional roller coaster. I love that you tell a story with such few and beautiful words. Although I wish the ending wouldn't be so sad, it is the truth about life.

This is one of my favourite poems from you, Im adding it to my library :)

[sonnie ibadah]

ur so sweet, thank u so much!

[aneeqa]

Amazing work....it gives an inspiration to how to take control of your life, you beautifully weaved a whole life into this small poem...keep it up :)

[sonnie ibadah]

thank u for reading...and the wonderful review.

[aneeqa]

Welcome as well as thnk u

[Raymond Federle]

Truly different facets of the same coin. The sense of being emotionally split down the center is palpable throughout this piece. Excellent! :) :)

[sonnie ibadah]

thank u ray....