Gone with the wind

My heart is strong from a thousand heartbreaks,
the chastity is gone with my countless mistakes,
once an innocent girl, with vivid dreams,
now a skeptical young woman, hopeless is seems.
my vision for tomorrow, is pain and sorrow,
the day I smile is when I realize I can fly,
up to a million stars, in a cloudless sky,
pain or no pain,
my life is as valuable as it can be!

Author's Note

well, it's my birthday, nothing special. But it'd also one of those days where everything goes wrong from the very beginning...these are just simple words on paper expressing complicated feelings in my heart, nothing fancy.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Life is so complicated sometimes my dear friend.It strips away our innoccence and leaves us bitter.This is very heartfelt sonnie:)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the honesty of this poem...Bravo...............

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you so much for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[BriBri]

Sweet and honest this is a good poem

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you 4 readn' it....