our forever

If the world is made of just the two of us,
then nothing can be against us.
if these feelings are so strong for both of us,
then love was made just for us.

If I love you today,
 a lot more than I loved you yesterday
and if tomorrow we are still together,
then how can’t we say forever?

Years would fly by,
a thousand or so,
and life can pass us by,
but I’ll still love you more.

Reviews

[aneeqa]

Ur poetry is like reflection of genuine love rather den a filmy one........
Keep it up

[sonnie ibadah]

thanks a lot......

[Vidya Bacchus]

A lovely ode to the one you love.It is most beautiful.

[sonnie ibadah]

thanks a lot :)

[Tom C]

That sounds like young love. That is very good. I like it. Keep spinning your golden words upon the paper and keep my minds eye enjoying your worlds. Thank you.

[sonnie ibadah]

thank you so much, I'm flattered...