i love you now...

i love you now...

A Poem by soniix
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this is a mix between fantasy and my real life thing... :P

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i had a good time yesterday,
i couldn't stop laughing all day.
you showed me your muscles,
and i couldn't resist and touch.

we had a day of fun, and jokes.
it was fun with the laughter and pokes.
my favorite part was when you held my arm,
and when i was alone you came and stood close to me.

at the end we walked alone,
i felt excited and walked into a cone!!
at the end you opened your muscular arms,
it was for a nice big hug.

that was the first of many and more to come,
i could taste your fruity bubble gum.
you wrapped your arms around my waist,
and it didn't feel weird.

you had to go,
and i had to,so,
i hope this day means something now,
for i have to say...

I THINK I LOVE YOU NOW! <3

© 2010 soniix


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Mia
This is an adorable poem! It's so different from your others, this one is more towards the happy side. I always love reading these poems, they lift up my spirits :) Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was adorable! I can see that you do love him. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sweet poem, thanks for sharing it with us!

Antonio :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem ^_^ I take it your describing about the guy at the bbq? ;)
~x~

Posted 14 Years Ago


A nice poem meaning wise. But form wise, it was little bumpy and didn't connect. But well, I THINK I LOVE THIS POEM NOW

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2010
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soniix
soniix

london, United Kingdom



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what can i say... theres a lot of drama in my life and i can only just carry on with my life :/ growing up ive always been the 'weird' one when now all of a sudden the weird is cool and im washed .. more..

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