SAFE HAVEN

Far,far away,
A distant memory,
Lost on the shores of time,
Was my fragile heart buried,
I journey back,
To when it was all perfect,
And everything moved in slow motion,
When the wind raced through my hair,
Making it rile in reaction,
When the rain danced with the dust,
In youthful glee,
And filled my nostrils,
Sweet musty scent,
Beckoning me,
To join in the sprightly dance of ecstasy,
Until the heavens pull you away from
My grip,
And then I find myself,
Stuck in reality.

Author's Note

Speak your mind.

Reviews

[Octavian]

The imagery about the beach was pitch perfect, crystal clear. You give excellent details and profound imagery along with delicate feeling that gives me a sense of being within your writing. I think you have awesome talent and writing skills. Dont ever loose it! :)

[Tarella]

Thank you so much..really nice to know that you understand it...

[Tarella]

Thank you so much..really nice to know that you understand it...

[Octavian]

anytime:), how can't I understand a beautiful piece of work when I get a chance to read it;)

[PurpleCupcake]

This definetly something I can relate to-slipping in and out of this thing we call reality. This is a beautiful poem and surely deserves the award of awesomeness. :)

[Tarella]

Wow,thanks a lot :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You write splendidly and convey marvelously...:)...................

[Tarella]

Thank you :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Yes speak your mind indeed :) well done Really liked how you wrote this :) and the opening was so great :)
Your heading enticed me though saw a movie with the same heading and was ahhhh :) well done :)