I'm Done- Song version, tell me what you think

I have a song version, and a poem version and I would like to know if it makes an alright song or if it should stay a poem. I am trying to come up with a new title as well.

I'm Done

I wish I didn't get your message,
You’re too controlling.
I’m tired of all the bondage,
It gets me thinking.
Do I really have to be here?
NO!
Can you hear me dear?
I’m sick!
I have everything to fear.
You're toxic.
I can't stand it anymore.
I threw out all your stuff,
It's all out the door.
Just go.
Just leave.
I don't need you anymore.

(Chorus)
I thought I used to love you,
But I still do,
I thought I used to need you,
But now we are through.
I don’t need your s**t
I can’t handle it.
Just leave and go home
Just leave me alone.

You thought you were my everything,
And I did too.
I don’t need a thing
And that means you.
I have had enough
I want you out with all your stuff.
I thought this would be tough
But I can handle it.
Remember that the next time you get lit.

(Chorus)
I thought I used to love you,
But I still do,
I thought I used to need you,
But now we are through.
I don’t need your s**t
I can’t handle it.
Just leave and go home
Just leave me alone.

Reviews

[Justine]

These are great lyrics with a powerful message. Breaking free can be so difficult and the chorus is full of courage, offering inspiration in hard times where doing the right thing is a challenge. I think it's good as lyrics, but would also stand alone as a poem. Nice writing ! Justine