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inside was the customary table in the center both the humans and the edrians had one the building identical in structure and furnish. the table was coated in blood as was its purpose, uncountable humans had been killed there for harming the world around us. they wanted to kill the very life giving home that the mother had given us. we where of no importance other than to protect our mother any who did not believe as such and live so would be put to death upon that table. the elders stood behind the table before the symbol of their people.

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[Prritiy]

just check this sentence, it is not clear to me- inside was the customary table in the center both the humans and the edrians had one the building identical in structure and furnish. -- should it be 'one each' for building as ' identical in structure' suggests.

Please try to make the chapters a bit longer with a few more paragraphs.
thankyou.

[Prritiy]

a look on this sentence too- we where of no importance other than to protect our mother any who did not believe as such and live so would be put to death upon that table.