13

“are you here to kill us?”

unable to summon words to speak with she merely shook her head. she let out a breath of relief and fell back against the chains that bound her. her black hair was matted with blood.lillian reached out and brushed it back from her face finally able to speak.

“im going to get you out of here.”

fear agian tore through her expression as she stuttered out,

“b--but what if they catch me i will be killed and you will take my place!!!!”

lillian smiled as she replied

“then we will have to hid in the dark”

Reviews

[Prritiy]

good going, intensity build up.

[Nick.B]

nicely done with chapter 13, has that 13 spook to it, well done

[marie]

Lol:) thanks!:) i try:)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

I like the concept here :)

[marie]

thank you:) which part?:)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Yw. The concept as a whole :)

[marie]

ahhh:) ok:)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

;)

[quinfinn]

a little rough around the edges but nicely thought out and well penned. good job.

[marie]

thanks:)