sorry it took so long... yeah i'm not gonna make excuses, i was being lazy... or preoccupied
May 2.
she is still hurting them…why do you have me wait? please, God please. this is yours, but i don't know how much longer i can hold on. i want to see Jabir again…please accept me into your home….please…..
May 4.
i don't even know what to say now!! i'm without that weak little whelp who always kept sniffling that it was wrong, that i should leave…but no…i am here to stay!! i know best here!!! i have won!! these people i have taken sit and cry around me, its so refreshing, no longer do they mock me no longer do they stand idly by and watch as i fall…now instead they fall…why does this not carry my joy as it once did… this was and is my life….perhaps i just need to give it time…
May 7.
i sit and listen….her silence is deafening…… where is she???? WHERE IS SHE?!?!?!
May 10.
i found one that was once her friend… she has to speak now… she is not gone, she can't be…no she is…i chased her away just as i did Jabir… they will not stop me!! i will keep this ones heart she is mine just like all the others!!
May 14.
another gone without leaving me the peace…perhaps i should try another way… i won't keep them anymore….. look!! my hand shakes and my vision again is red…perhaps this is a sign? time to find another playmate…
May 18.
i am tiring of this caution, it has gotten me nowhere!! my laugh has caught in my throat, and my every move is held with a contained excitement, i do not wish to contain it!! soon…i will release it soon… i simply need a little time…
May 22.
it is time.
May 26.
they are coming…. i have to run…something of her lingers begging me not to!! silence little girl you cannot win this!!
May 28.
why? WHY?! this isn't right.. this isn't fair!! i want my peace!! i want my joy!! why must they chase me so?? it keeps me from my play… this is her fault.. to think i missed her!! she is the cause of this she has to be!!!
Wow, this is very gripping! You have me hooked and begging BUT waiting patiently for more ;-) I'm not patient, ask Frieda or anyone! They'll tell you ;-P
Anyhoo, very captivating and I loved it, cannot wait for more! Excellent Marie
I'm so glad you like this!!:) and well I am hoping to have another update in by the end of the month.. read moreI'm so glad you like this!!:) and well I am hoping to have another update in by the end of the month:) can ya hold out till then??:) so glad it has caught your attention it is an honor!:)
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Yip, I can do that ;-P
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yay:) hope you like the next piece as well as the last ones:)
Thank you!:) glad you like it:) and I want to thank you for your devotion to this piece and followin.. read moreThank you!:) glad you like it:) and I want to thank you for your devotion to this piece and following it from it's start!!:) hoping to have the next chapter in by the end of the month:)
interesting little write, because i have not been keeping up with the previous chapters , i obviously don't know what is going on, but the writing style is engaging and well planned out , so it is a fluid read. well done , marie!
if you like you can read through the earlier parts, must say that i'm glad you liked it:) takes alot.. read moreif you like you can read through the earlier parts, must say that i'm glad you liked it:) takes alot of planning and careful wording...think i rewrote this one five times, than left it for....around three weeks before uploading it...
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story telling is never easy....especially if you are going chapter by chapter. i will try to remembe.. read morestory telling is never easy....especially if you are going chapter by chapter. i will try to remember to go back to those when i can get through my r/r list...if i forget you can always remind me, one chapter at a time....please.
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lol:) ok:) will do looking forward to your thoughts on the story:)
There are so many emotions shown in this write. The deliverance of what you are trying to get across is wonderful. Bravo :)
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thank you:) i'm so glad you like it:) is there anything you see that i could improve upon? aside for.. read morethank you:) i'm so glad you like it:) is there anything you see that i could improve upon? aside form capitalization and punctuation, this time i actually did it on purpose, not out of sheer laziness...:)lol
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Hmm at the moment no because i meh tummy is making a fuss about food lol :) i will re read it severa.. read moreHmm at the moment no because i meh tummy is making a fuss about food lol :) i will re read it several times and tell ya tonight:)
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ok:) thanks you much!!:) and go eat!! i will leave school and shove it down your throat!!:) lol
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Im in the process of making this future transaction of nutrients a definite merger :) lol went busin.. read moreIm in the process of making this future transaction of nutrients a definite merger :) lol went businessy lol
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get it done your on the clock!!:)lol
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tick tock........... The clock got shot. lol
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80 poor clock!!
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It owed meh monay!!
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so you shoot it?? should have tortured it till it gave it all to you >:)lol
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Nah.. He had already given it to the grandfather clock lol
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then go get it!!:)
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Its in cancun!! haha i never told you that story lol
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