questions

questions questions all around

they reach the sky from the ground

answers answers none are found

they barely ever make a sound

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

A few sentences sometimes spoken, they make more sense than a long conversation.
Every line had more to it, when I read it couple of times.
Very nice work!

[anxia]

Aww. I totally agree with Rachel. WE just have to wait for the answers. Thats all that we can do.
But waiting can be so trying and depressing and this poem just displays that. Nice work.

[marie]

Thank you so much:)

[RachelReaper]

That seems true most of the time, we ask questions and the answers can be tricky to find. I guess you just have to be patient for the answers. Great poem, it was short, but packed with meaning.

[marie]

thank you!:) i'm glad you liked it:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well - there really is no more to say - perfection!

[marie]

wow:) really?:) thank you so much its an honor:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome, I mean the piece stands solid to the reader, one asks oneself questions but never reveals to others, I will be thinking on your words for a while.

[marie]

yay:) its always amazing to have my work echo in the minds of my readers:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

nothing more need be said, this is excellent.

[marie]

thank you:) i'm so glad you liked it:)

[Ethale Captor]

More truth has never been placed in a single stanza. Excellent work, a true masterpiece.

[marie]

thank you:) i'm flattered:)

[Ethale Captor]

My pleasure.

[marie]

:)

[Ethale Captor]

Why the numerous replies?

[marie]

It's being stupid..

[Ethale Captor]

As it tends to be.

[marie]

yeah....

[Ethale Captor]

I assume you were connected to Netgear in the chapel when it malfunctioned? It is a rather faulty connection.

[marie]

yeah... i was..

[Ethale Captor]

And by your replies, I also assume you are not busy in English today?

[marie]

right now, no we aren't:)

[Ethale Captor]

Are you doing anything in your English class today? If not, I believe I will be available online until school is dismissed.

[marie]

i don't know:)lol

[Ethale Captor]

Neither do I.

[marie]

i guess we will find out:)lol

[Ethale Captor]

Indeed.

[marie]

can we continue this over a private message its getting kind of long:)lol

[Ethale Captor]

If you so wish.

[marie]

alright:)

[Nick.B]

True lines, sometimes the answer is there but you just can't reach it...great job

[marie]

thank you:) i'm glad you like it:)

[StayAnchored]

Short and straight to the point! :)

[StayAnchored]

Good job ;)

[marie]

thank you so much:)

[quinfinn]

a sad commentary when the answers make no sound. a good answer should resonate and be recognized. this is a clever little write, few words make many observations. well done!

[marie]

thank you:) i'm glad you like it:) means alot:)

[Sir Joseph]

You must be trying to come up with them off the fly like me:)

[Sir Joseph]

Also, why not simply "Questions"

[marie]

you told me to!! and idk...

[Sir Joseph]

I said try it and you did way better than i do:)

[marie]

ehh its lacks the spontaneity yours do

[Sir Joseph]

but it surpasses in quality

[marie]

Was going for spontaneous not really good at that on poetry

[Sir Joseph]

seemed good to me:) great actually:)

[marie]

Even if it wasn't silly??

[Sir Joseph]

Yeah :)