so it seems

You never see this apathy

You never hear my cries and screams

This is plain to me

You are blind it seems

Author's Note

sorry, i know its short, please give me some pointers on how to improve it

Reviews

[Sanjana.N.D]

nice little piece.....

[marie]

thank you:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"you never hear my cries or screams" would be better...


but otherwise, a fine little piece.

jacob

[Saya Marie Vandiesmonte]

I agree other than that misspelling it was very well done from a poem that short

[marie]

yeah.. i need to fix that, thanks for pointing it out:)