10

10

A Chapter by marie

lillian guided the horse to a stop in front of the elders circle, there she took the saddle bag and released the horse from its reigns.

“go home”

she whispered to it just before walking into the front doors of the elders building. inside was a small circular room the only place the people of the town where allowed. she looked around and glared at the blood soaked table that stood in the center of the room it was a sturdy oak table that served as a place to behead the edrians, to torture humans who talked of peace between the two races. she had been there to many times.



© 2013 marie


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wonderful going on.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Sounds like a cult...well described and would have never guess she was there at one point, actually, considering her attitude from earlier it makes sense.

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

as you read on you'll see exactly how much she had been there, and it is a cult of sorts
My computer won't let me read chapter 11 =(

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

oh no!!!
Ashley G.

11 Years Ago

*pouts and whines cause I can't read it*

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