jabir's revenge part 3

Feb. 3 

jabir..i'm so sorry..i can't take this.. i just can't she's still here… its their fault, but..its my fault to, should have hidden better so they wouldn't find me in her blood while it was still flowing from my wrists…i'm so sorry… she made you leave so long ago…..no….no it wasn't long, just…..no i can't remember that..mustn't remember that. Jabir please you must leave me she will hurt you again..please please please please please go..you have to… Aaliya told me that you would never come back, but you are here… Why?! why why oh why?please please she will destroy you she tried to get rid of you before, she doesn't like that your still here…

Feb. 5

no…no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no NO PLEASE NO!!! they can't they just can't they can't take you!! Jabir they tried to take you from the place she left you…they already took the rest of you, but no!!1 they can't have your heart…its mine!! mine mine mine they can't take that they can't have you…..she will fix it…she has to she can't let you leave….i will kill her if she does

Feb. 6.

please….please you can't go….no..its not safe…GO GO GO GO GO go now PLEASE!!!!!! Aaliya will help me you don't have to stay…..Jabir, i will make her leave….i promise

Feb.9

this place is a good place…no one knows i'm hiding, Jabir its safe. you know this, i see you do…..there are many children here…..children like me, but nothing like me, they speak of the same person the man did….but they say he is no person, that he can do anything….i don't know who this person is but these girls they are different….

Feb. 10.

the more i stay here the more it seems that i m free of her, she comes less and less, but when she does, the people here don't hurt me….they place the girl with me and she speaks to her. i don't want the girl with me when she is here…i don't want to hurt her. Jabir please protect her

Feb.11

the girl…no..Adina hasn't left my side…oh i wish i could speak with her but she is still here….she had been here since he came…

Feb.14

i can't stop thinking of you Jabir…i saw the place yesterday…your place…our place…oh Jabir i'm so sorry

Feb. 16

please…i know i said to go, but….no stay away, its safer that way….

Feb.19

What is going on?

Feb. 21

where is she? i haven't seen her in so long…..please Jabir where is she. i know i wanted her gone but where is she? Adina says its for the best, but i'm so alone!!! WHERE IS SHE?!WHERE ARE YOU?! ANSWER ME PLEASE?!…….they said you would leave…that this person they speak of would make you and her go…i don't want to be alone….Aaliya said that these kind of people are insane…i don't know, they don't seem insane…..

Feb.24

i can finally think straight for the first time in years…maybe everything will be ok? still, i feel as if she is still here….no no she can't be, she is gone…as is he, but i kept my promise, she is gone. 

Feb.28

maybe….just maybe...

Reviews

[Nick.B]

This part shows the more crazy side of the main character, it's a more darker and raw chapter, as she was trying to remember it all, love this chapter and how you ended with a "maybe...just maybe..."

[marie]

thanks :) i'm glad you like it:)

[Ethale Captor]

Again, nicely done. I sense a strong continuation.

[marie]

well i've been having a lot of fun with this one so i probably will

[Ethale Captor]

I look forward to it.

[marie]

:) well hopefully you will enjoy the next as much as you have these

[Ethale Captor]

I presume I will.

[marie]

I'm glad:)

[Ethale Captor]

You usually are.

[marie]

only on select things

[Ethale Captor]

Like this.

[marie]

yep:)

[Ethale Captor]

... Now what are we to do?

[marie]

ponder the meaning of life? think of ways to annoy mrs porshia? get rid of jana? ooh i have one:) maybe we could climb up on the ceiling and dangle from the support beams

[Ethale Captor]

Sounds amusing, you first.

[marie]

ok:) give me a leg up:)

[Ethale Captor]

You must stand, first.

[marie]

but.... meh computer will fall..

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

I WANNA HELP 8D *crawls away back into the shadows*

[marie]

sara?...... ooh you two pick up the chair i'm sitting in and throw me up there:)

[Ethale Captor]

May I ask where you came from?

[Ethale Captor]

I do not even know anymore...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

I came from my mommy's uterus. Duh.

And okay Marie, hold on tight because it will most definitely no doubt fail and you will go sailing out that window into the woods. With Slendy. I hope you brought $20.

[Ethale Captor]

Shall I take my leave from the conversation?

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

NOPE. *grabs Ethale by hood* STAY AND PLAY.....and disregard how awkward that sounded.

[Ethale Captor]

I believe that is a statement not easily disregarded...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

Where did Marie go? Did I scare her off? *grabs flashlight* MARIEEEEEEEEE? Where are you my love?

[marie]

ooooh so where getting that kind of talk on writerscafe my fake lesbian lover? and ethale you WILL help through me in the air so i can meet slendy and give hima a kiss *leans over to sarah and whispers* will you be so kind as to tell joey why i am dead so he will know who to kill:) he and ethale will have such fun with this one:)

[Ethale Captor]

........

[Ashley G.]

What the heck are you guys doing?

[marie]

yay:) ethale agrees to help:)

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

OTAY! *gives two huge thumbs up* And Ethale we have to throw Marie into the air so she can meet Slendy and give him a kiss...and no doubt have a tree impaled in her.

[Ethale Captor]

Oh God, not another one...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

ASHLEY!! *football tackles* Welcome to this totally not gay conversation I so rudely intruded on between Marie and Ethale! CB ETHALE LOOKIE! ISH A KITTY!

[marie]

uhhh well... apparently i'm being thrown into the rafters and falling through some glass into the woods to kiss slender and then i will die cause i don't have $20 so joey and Ethale will have to kill him in sweet revenge then joey will revive me....somehow....

[Ethale Captor]

I never agreed to anything, as I recall. And to Ashley, I haven't the slightest clue as to what is going on.

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

AND I GOT SWAG. >8D

But yeah. Pretty much what Marie said. ^^ Wanna help us throw her to Slendy?

[marie]

you are helping throw me into the ceiling rafters

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

ETHALE YOU AGREED SHIADAP

[Ashley G.]

You guys are crazy and by association I guess I am too...?

[marie]

PUT THE KITTY DOWN AND THROW ME ALREADY!!!

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

YES YOU ARE. I DUB THEE....A LUNATIC. And don't worry Marie, you'll be kissing the ceiling. CB It'll be so beautiful until you crash.

[marie]

uhmmmm YES DUH!!

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*hurls Marie at ceiling* FLY MARIE!!! FLAP YOUR ARMS!!!

[marie]

slender here i come:) and now we just have to wait for joey to get here:)

[Ethale Captor]

.....

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

Ethale = Scared for life.

[marie]

COME ON ALREADY THROW ME!!!

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

I did. Q_Q I told you to fly...

[Ethale Captor]

Not even close, just unresponsive.

[Ashley G.]

I'm leaving now....I wonder what all the people who might possibly scroll through the comments thinks of this messed up conversation...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

They will be envious of our obvious creativity and friendship. >8C BECAUSE FRIENDSHIP IS FREAKING MAGIC.

[Ethale Captor]

Agreed.

[marie]

HEY LOOK ITS SLENDY!!! PUCKER UP SWEETY!!!

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*watches Marie from the chapel window with camera* OuO I hope there's blood and bone.

[Ashley G.]

I don't. T_T

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*covers Ashley's eyes* Then don't watch. CB

[marie]

*grabs random tree then climbs down and awkwardly hugs slender from behind:)* looky here sara i found a bunny!!

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

MARIE THAT IS THE SEXIEST BUNNY EVER. *Grell-speed takes pictures* 8D SLENDY I WANT YOUR SUIT!

[Ashley G.]

That's Not a freaking bunny...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*covers Ashley's mouth with wing* SHUT UP I'M TRYING TO TAKE PICTURES OF MARIE'S IMPENDING DOOM! >8C

[Ashley G.]

What's Ethale got to say about all this? Ethale? Jeez did you just leave me here?!

[Ethale Captor]

Not in the slightest, but at least we are able to watch her be impaled on a tree. Enjoy the show.

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

She abandoned you you're adopted, Fluttershy. *continues to take pictures of Marie and Slendy* XD

[Ashley G.]

Why does everyone else want to see marie be impaled on a tree?! Marie, do YOU want to be impaled on a tree?

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

More like Slendy's gonna impale the TREE on HER. :D *watches sitting on the edge of the balcony* GO MARIE! KISS THAT BUNNY!

[marie]

BUT IT IS!!! I INSIST... oh crap there goes my arms

[marie]

... how do i kiss this bunny he ain't got not lips...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*snapping pictures like crazy* MARIE, HUG HIM WITH YOUR NUBS!

[Ethale Captor]

I believe Memory will be the only one to get this reference, but poor, poor Peter White. God save that poor bunny.

[Ashley G.]

Ethale! You're suppose to be the sensible one!...Most of the time.

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

HEEEEEEE, I get it. XD And just...draw lips with Lady Gaga lipstick using your mouth and kiss that. :D

[marie]

ashley?... how do i put this i want to be impaled so i can be romantically revived by joey:)

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

PFFFFFFFFF, Ethale, SENSIBLE? GURL PLEEEEASE. XD

[Ethale Captor]

........ No comment.

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

And by romantically revived she means CPR like in all the cheesy movies. BC

[marie]

ok:) * does as instructed and kisses slender passionately*

[marie]

uhhhh.....sure:) CPR:)

[Ethale Captor]

I am sensible. I also love gore. This is my alibi for the police report.

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

*jaw drops* HOLY COW SHE DID IT. *hides behind Ashley* Be my human meat shield. CB HIT THE DESK, SLENDY'S GONNA BLOW! *totally wants to draw this scene now*

[Ashley G.]

I said 'Most of the time' and marie doesn't kissing Slendy count as cheating on joey?

[marie]

crap he bit my tongue...how did he even do that?! he ain't got no lips!! or teeth...

[marie]

uh.....maybe...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

No shut up Ashley, we're....experimenting. CB Yeah. How long it takes to tick Slendy off.

[Ashley G.]

Don't use me as a Shield!! Ethale, do something!

[marie]

oh Sara:) is my little mexican here yet?

[Ashley G.]

Sure marie your knight in shining armor has arrived...

[marie]

oh wow.... he got here fast...JOEY!!!!

[Ashley G.]

uh...bye.

[marie]

:) he he he:)

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

WHY IS THIS CONVERSATION STILL GOING EIGHT HOURS LATER *headdesk* IT'S NINE ELEVEN AT NIGHT LADIES.

[marie]

uhhh...its exactly 24 hours later:) and joey still has yet to save me from slender man who has yet to kill me :)

[Ashley G.]

Uh I don't really know how Joey will romantically save you so I'll leave that to Ethale and Sara....

[marie]

NOT SAVE!!! REVIVE!! GOTS TO DIE FIRST FOR THAT TO HAPPEN BAKA!!!

[Ashley G.]

Don't call me baka =( So You...kiss Slendy and he...strangles you or something. I'm not good at this stuff...

[Dolfury Nixie Ritter]

No, you kiss Slendy, he bursts into eternal flames, he pimp slaps you and beheads you, Joey comes and revives you, Frankenstein gets written, and then I drag Ethale off into the sunset and pretend it never happened.

[Ashley G.]

Wow great way to end it. This conversation has continued on for two days... 0_0"

[marie]

ABSOLUTELY NOT!! I'M THE ONE DYING AND BEING SAVED SO I GET A SAY IN THIS so here's how it goes:) one i kiss slender, he bites my tongue, then he impales me vampire style with a giant tree, joey bursts in and kills him with one of the many much knives he keeps on person at all times, slender dies joey takes me to the hospital and they fix me up, but i won't wake up the doctors can't figure out why everyone is very upset he comes into my hospital room a single tear on his cheek he leans in and kisses me thinking i will never wake up, BUT i do and then frankenstien is inspired and written ethale is dragged off into the woods memory is very confused so ethale spends fifteen min trying to get her to understand then lindsey comes in and sits in on it ethale has mental explosion and gives up me and joey get married and we all live happily confused lives:)

[Ashley G.]

What do I sit on?

[marie]

a tree stump:) with pink mold on the side:)

[Ashley G.]

Eew...gross! What the heck PINK mold?

[marie]

where is ethale?

[Ashley G.]

Reading at the moment....

[marie]

YEP:) pink mold:) so it squuishes under your butt:) and stains your pants:) and is all slimy, and makes me laugh:) and makes ethale start ranting ways to get the stain out and makes memory laugh and ...and .....and....and....and....and....and...and.... and is just plain old amusing:)

[marie]

^^

[Ashley G.]

Eeeeew! Thanks a lot. 0n0

[marie]

your welcome^^ yay:) she likes it:) happy birthday:)

[Ashley G.]

No. That was suppose to be a frowny face and sarcasm. 0n0

[Ashley G.]

And It's not my birthday.

[marie]

:) she loves it OuO

[marie]

i can tell:)

[Ashley G.]

No-argh! 0n0 :( T^T

[marie]

:) well these pj's are making me sleepy, and joey and i are now living happily confused lives, so well:) i'm gonna go:) enjoy your slimy pink mold stains:)

[Ashley G.]

Whatever...*The End* -maybe

[Ashley G.]

I can't wait for the next part! KEEP WRITING...so she has a split personality, she killed the guy she loved and she's possibly at a church? I'll understand more the more you write. Good luck! =3

[marie]

glad you liked it hope you like the next update as well:)

[Ashley G.]

I'm sure I will and I definitely like it so far.

[marie]

yay:)