jabirs revenge

dec.5

thump… thump… i can hear you in the room, not like what most would call hearing, but more i feel you here. its like i hear you and see you, but i know i'm not, so i say i feel you. your here…even if your not.

dec.10

their obnoxious laughs seem to grow more loud each day, their stupidity also, they never see what i s clearly written, that or they are so pig headed that they refuse to see what is right in front of them. they are monsters, the parasites in this world i cannot seem to be rid of them everywhere i turn, everywhere i look.to the left to the right they won't leave!! this world is filled with them. humanity. the pigs. helot of them are the worlds arschloch's

dec12

i can't take it anymore…no.. no… i just can't!! its impossible, how can i rid myself of these things?! these thoughts of them, they plague me every day. of them. those things that follow me everywhere. you would know what to do, but no. your not here, because of her, because she took you from me! your kiss would save me jabir!! jabir, why? why did she do such a thing? 

dec.21 

i have done it. finally. why didn't i just start it off with this?so much torture could have been avoided…..

dec.27

it seems each one that goes brings me that much more sanity. here i am laughing from such pure joy that i cannot seem to contain it… the people here are staring at me as if i am insane. no i am regaining sanity that these people forgot so long ago. i have embraced our nature, and kept a few trophies…… the little girl gave me a hand in this, so of course i had to keep it. and then the mann insisted he had to give me a piece of his mind, so naturally i kept that too.oh people stop staring stop throwing these looks at me or you may be next. please… please.. i cannot control myself

dec.30

this thing i have found can only be described as joy. oh how i cannot wait to show these people. oh jabir you can go now, i have found a way to make sure she pays…along with the rest of them. i know you don't want to go, but she already made you leave… you poor thing don't worry she won't hurt you anymore. you see? i opened her up and now write with her life-flow. please jabir, go.. i can't i can't just keep on.. you see my hands are starting to shake…the world goes fuzzy…jabir i have your revenge for you.. don't worry… i'll see you soon.. she's going…she will see you with me i'm sorry i didn't realize that she would come with me, please jabir run!! its not safe my love!! go… please...

Reviews

[Kuro]

Hi marie! You sent me a read request for part six of this story, so I figured I should probably read the entire thing. XD I must say, this is awesome! I'm hooked and I will continue reading with enthusiasm :)

[marie]

lol:) yeah i haven't written on this in a while and i read request this to everyone and didn't think till later that i have gotten....A LOT new friends on here, i am so glad you like it:) i should have the next one up by the end of the month....hopefully:) anyway thank you so much for reading and reviewing:)

[Saya Marie Vandiesmonte]

This is absolutely amazing!

[marie]

thank you:)

[Ashley G.]

Capitalization and Punctuation errors but other than that I liked the lost love story behind it. Now I'll go read the second one! =3

[marie]

:) glad you liked it :) hope you enjoy the next one as well:)

[babygirl]

I like it nice write

[marie]

thank you so much:) not meaning to sound needy, but could you read request this to people, i want to see how far i can get this to go

[babygirl]

Sure

[marie]

thank you so much:)

[Silhouette]

Wow, really suspensful and exciting. A little twisted, too, that made it even more interesting. Great job with this write. :)

[marie]

thank you:) i'm glad you enjoyed it:) think you can read request this to others? i don't want to sound needy, but i really want to get this out there:)

[Silhouette]

you bet I can…and you're welcome :)

[marie]

:) yay:)

[StayAnchored]

This is extremely interesting... I enjoyed the diary format and the plot :)

[marie]

thank you:) think you can read request it to others i want to see how many people like it and if i should continue it

[StayAnchored]

Sure! :)

[marie]

:)thanks:)

[Nick.B]

This is very well created as a diary-form, but the plot seems even better, it has lost love, revenge...this is quite unique...I'm curious if you will continue with this

[marie]

i don't know if i will continue it, kind of just threw it down and then put it up here to see how it would do. depending on how many people i can get to read this and like it i may continue it

[Nick.B]

okay...you have my vote :D

[marie]

lol:) thanks:)