the eyes

the eyes

A Poem by marie

the eyes the eyes 

a dark surprise

wrench them out fore they tell their lies


the hands the hands 

dirty plans

tear them off fore the try again


the mouth the mouth 

scream and shout

sew it shut fore it rats you out


the ears the ears 

leave them be 

you'll want them to hear their cry and screams

© 2012 marie


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Wow creepy write. I like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

thanks i'm glad you like it
Wow.... This is awesome. I love it. I love the darker theme. It's excellent! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


}Echo{

11 Years Ago

It's really good. :)
marie

11 Years Ago

:)
}Echo{

11 Years Ago

:)
Excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Ethale Captor

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
marie

11 Years Ago

:)
wow... great write, just great!! the four main body parts that cause us grief

Posted 12 Years Ago


marie

11 Years Ago

Thanks it was rattling around in my head for a while:)
luviva

11 Years Ago

nice that you put it out there
marie

11 Years Ago

:) thanks :)

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