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sorry i haven't posted in so long i kind of forgot about it :)

lillain ran outside to her neighbors home and into their stables inside where two mares one brown with a single white hook and one completely black. she ran her hands along the brown ones flank.

“i have a job for you, do you think you are up for it?”

she whispered into the mares ear. she grabbed a saddle blanket and some horse bags. quietly filling up the bags with hay and woods anything she knew was flammable. she silently placed it over the horse’s back and hoisted herself up onto the horse with a practiced grace.

Reviews

[Prritiy]

so the partner in crime is neighbor's mare. you chose brown one, i thought you would choose black to make it more invisible at night :)

[marie]

Brown can be just as stealthy as black, they are against a natural backround and i thought it would make more sense after all most animals don't go for black as their camo at night...

[Prritiy]

ok, thanks for explaining :)

[Amaya Sullivan]

I am still interested. I will give you a review on every chapter. I believe you aren't getting on every chapter because they are just paragraphs. You have my attention and I am sure other readers as well at this point, so they are more anxious on reading the story though.

Do you ride horses?

[marie]

i probably do need to lengthen the updates to a couple paragraphs, but i really like updating in short bursts seeing peoples thoughts as they read along

yes i do ride horses, the first time i rode i was asked how long i had been taking lessons:) i am very proud of that fact, i don't ride as much now as i wish i could, but i still love the art, and the feel of the animals breath underneath me, the wind in my hair and the power that seems to rush through us both as i ride

[Amaya Sullivan]

Your description was very good and I figure you did. I that is another reason why I like that you posting paragraphs as well. I think readers on here should follow the method by reviewing what they thought of the paragraph.

[marie]

Thanks!:) glad someone agrees:)