corpses marriage

well. i put my pencil to paper or rather hand to keyboard and this kind of just happened

lost in time

peace sublime

crying out

final shout

fading breathe

awaiting death

can you hear

deaths carriage draw near?

looking on 

in joyous song

i'll meet you soon

in life's full bloom

light growing

love showing

see your eyes

hear your lies

no matter now

in your caring brow

as i run away

do you want to play?

your red flow

will see the roosters crow

and fade eternally

as i run forever free 

don't you fear

as i come near

you'll join this carriage

that brings you to a corpses marriage

don't try to run

you'll miss the fun

in cold cold earth

the end of life's birth

come rest my love

lay down from above

by my side you'll lay

before you wither and turn grey

i'm waiting here

as you walk ever near

above my grave you play

drawing out the day

you'll fall in the night

to join my eternal plight

tonight you'll rest by my side

with a coffin as your bride

Reviews

[Sir Joseph]

May i ask who this piece was written about? you can message me the answer if you choose. and this is a very good piece. i love the sharp sudden stanzas. Gets the heart beating and the emotion feeling :)

[marie]

yeah... uhm, just gonna say that this is one from my moms point of view, nuff said

[Sir Joseph]

ahh ok

[marie]

yeah..

[}Echo{]

I like this. It's kind of confusing, though... But the style and attitude of your writing is great. :)

[marie]

Thanks for the review:)

[}Echo{]

:)

[Jo March]

Very lovely, a bit difficult to read, I'd suggest splitting it up into stanzas? you have a lovely writing style

[marie]

thanks i love your work to ill try splitting it up into stanza's tell me if its any better that way :) i really appreciate your feedback :)