Final

I got bored and well..... This happened

Rain and wind
Storm and power
Life and death
True loves hour
Don't you know the flower girls fate
She's standing there at heavens gate
Your lasting smile
She sees no more
Her mothers blood
Spilt upon the floor

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Wow. I like the ambiguity of this . . . how much of it lies in what is unspoken, rather than what is spoken. That's always a quality I admire

[marie]

Thanks I always try to put a bit of an unspoken message in all my work