The Point of View

The thoughts of two that cannot seem to be

Girl:

i sit here and wonder

if you notice my hair

or the way i smile at you,

though you never look at me

and i wish that you'd know how i feel

before you go

Boy:

i sit here and glance at you

through the corners of my eyes

i love your hair, and the way you smile,

though it is never at me

and i wish that you'd know how i feel

before i go

Author's Note

confessions, with a hint of imagination

Reviews

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Wow, this is really good, enjoyed this, it has a longing.