Guess I am dumb
A Poem by
sonceotrok
Sometimes its dumb to be dumb
I guess I,m dumb, Are you dumb too?
Really-weely dumb?
Huh?
I mean--its a dumb world,
And dumb is a dumb word
But its not a bad word?
Whatever!
My dog is dumb,
His name is Dumbo,
He thinks I am Rambo!!!
Bow-wow!
I got a tongue,
I aint too deaf,
I am young.
(wink-wink)
So dumb,
So so dumb,
To call me dumb!
Clever!
© 2011 sonceotrok
Author's Note
give me your dumb comments
and i will mutely thank you
Reviews
You got style, kid.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanku Sandbox sir im am tryin
Thanks for making me smile, I feel this way often. In the morning b4 coffee, and after work. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thanks for making me smile, I feel this way often. In the morning b4 coffee, and after work. :)
11 Years Ago
Have another coffe on me Muse thanku
I like this, it has character
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like this, it has character
11 Years Ago
I am happy you find the character in my lil piece Droll
Lol this was funny.
"I got a tongue,
I aint too deaf,
I am young.
(wink-wink)"
My favorite part haha XP
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lol this was funny.
"I got a tongue,
I aint too deaf,
I am young.
(wink-wink)"
My favorite part haha XP
11 Years Ago
U fav part is mine too nonsense:) thanku
Very good! This made me laugh.
Very cute write and insightful
at the same time. Shows different
perspectives of the word and meaning,
as well as how you use it as a pronoun.
Cute write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very good! This made me laugh.
Very cute write and insightful
at the same time. Shows different
perspectives of the word and meaning,
as well as how you use it as a pronoun.
Cute write!
11 Years Ago
i am not too much into grammar but i like your review and i hope to like you:) thanku olivia
Ahaha, funny.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ahaha, funny.
11 Years Ago
hahah lexys thanku
I think this is cute, and insightful all at the same time.
It's like ones perception of the "word" and it's for ever changing form
Which I think makes this a grand write Hugs, AnnaMaria.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think this is cute, and insightful all at the same time.
It's like ones perception of the "word" and it's for ever changing form
Which I think makes this a grand write Hugs, AnnaMaria.
11 Years Ago
hugs to u 2 Ana thankuyou pretty woman
I got confused....maybe I am dumb!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I got confused....maybe I am dumb!!
11 Years Ago
its confusing too...when i was dumb...now i am dumbest at WC...thanku Suki
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Added on June 13, 2011
Last Updated on June 13, 2011
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